Harbingers are plane walkers. They possess an intimate connection with the planes beyond the material. At times they are aware of this, at others they come into the knowledge after much hardship and toil.
Intimate, Innate, or just “They possess a connection”
Uncertain of the value of the second sentence. Aware of the connection? and at other times the come into the knowledge – or that they make the connection
Class Reference Table 1
Harbinger and Seeker need to be corrected. (i.e., Harbringer and Seeksrs)
Harbinger Class – Page 18
Overall, I don’t think the Harbinger needs to be capitalized within a sentence.
Overall, is the Harbinger a plane walker, planes walker, or as Wizards of the Coast, planeswalkers / planeswalker?
Paragraph 3: Harbingers come from all walks of life, all races and genders. The sight knows no particular religion, nor philosophy or creed. Born with the second sight of the plane walker they are cursed or blessed, depending with whom you talk.
Is “The sight knows no” an error? What is meant by sight?
Comma after second sight of the plane walker.
After "second sight" is "of the plane walker" necessary?
FATE’S ARM: At 1st level the Harbinger chooses one weapon, piece of armor or even equipment that is associated with their character. The item can be any one from the equipment list in the Players Handbook, Adventurers Backpack or any other source material. Items range from swords and axes, to shields, helm’s, suits of armor or even an arm band, a pair of boots or ring. The chosen item is sentient and possesses an alignment and a will.
The chart does not show bonuses for armor, rings, boots, etc. I.e., 1st level bonus is +1 damage. What is the equivalent for armor, rings, boots, etc.
The sentence "The item is considered a magical item, its bonuses determined by its Will." should be up further in the text.
Harbinger Class – Page 19
Top of the page should read, "In addition, all items possess..."
Note if the item is not a weapon and is a ring, armor, boots, etc. the table may need to be adjusted. This should be noted, additional item purpose tables, or ideas provided.
If the item is destroyed the Harbinger loses one level per point of Will the item possesses
Comma after destroyed.
Period at the end of the sentence.
If the weapon is destroyed, how is a new item created?
As written, a 5th level character would lose 19 levels. Should this be worded as "loses one level per point of Will over 17"?
Plane Shift at 3rd level with unlimited duration seems very powerful. Perhaps this should be replaced with Ethereal Jaunt spell or removed until 10th level. At 3rd level, maybe a more suited bonus is more like the ranger ability changed to planar creatures.
Text within Plane Shift is "ethereal planes". Should this be singular? Or was the intent to have "astral and ethereal planes" as mentioned in the next ability?